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Tracy
4/7/2011 04:26:53 pm
I love your presentation of the newsletter, especially for the donation part in it. It looks professional!! and the homepage!!the photo slide~i love the pictures too! that's really cool~~By the way, you have the same problem with us=)your organisation established in 2008 but there is only 1 newsletter. will you add some more in the web page? last but not least, just a little suggestion,it is better to use the same font size in every page=)it'll look more organized!
Florence
4/7/2011 04:27:01 pm
I like your website layout and the name of the organisation, Small Shop Support. It is clear and people would understand the aims of ur organisation quickly!
However, plz attention to the following sentences:
1). Under the 'About Us' page:
Established in 2008, Small Shop Support (SSS), ...
2). Under the 'Donation' page:
Download and print Donation Form, sending the completed form to Small Shop Support: (use the verb 'send' instead of sending.)
Good job and add oil!!
Jessica (CHEF)
4/7/2011 04:28:09 pm
Great Job!
I like the photo gallery in you home page! It is really professional. You have added another media of presentation in your website, which is really creative.
Also, the design of your annual is also very good. Really look like a real annual report.
However, I think that some of the contents in your website are too packed together(in the page of 'successful stories'). Visitors may find it different to look at it. You may consider to add some line-spacing in it.
You may also add some more "BACK" which links back to the previous page of the website. This seems more convenient for the visitors.
I really like the layout of your website. It is very tidy and easy to read. In addition, the contrasting colours used are eye-catching. The designs of annual report and newsletter are great too! Good job!
But I think the photos under 'Our works' can be larger. And more content should be added in the annual report. I suggest you to add a content page so your information will be more organized. Also, the font stlyes should be consistent.
Debbie
4/7/2011 04:32:52 pm
You all really did a good job! This website is well designed. I love the photos. And the annual report looks really professional. As for the page "Good Shop Guide", will you consider providing a link to the "publications"? It is more user friendly as visitors can read and know more about your Guide.
Add oil!
Cindy
4/7/2011 04:34:31 pm
I like your website becuse it is very organized and professional. I espically like the design of your newsletter because it is very tidy and clear. However, I think that you can add more content in it such as interviews of your members and staff to let people understand your organization more :)
alice
4/7/2011 04:35:14 pm
:)The 'What we do' section is very well conceived!
:( you may want to provide backlink buttons so visitors don't need to hit the 'back' button
Thomas
4/7/2011 04:35:18 pm
The website is very detailed and organised. Also it contains a lot of photos which are very real and it really makes me want to donate. Overall the website is great but I would like to suggest that the annual reports could be longer and more detailed.
Malina
4/7/2011 04:44:53 pm
nice job!
your organisation is really convincing and almost too convicing that i think you may need to state 'this is just student work'on every page so people will not get confused.
you may consider to adjust the font size on each page because it's a bit inconsistent right now.
the page layout is really nice and professional looking, so do the newsletter and annual review! well done!
the picture slide show on the front page is also very impressive.
for the newsletters, are you sure you should used volume and issue together with different meanings? i thought they are the same thing.
well done!
Christy
4/7/2011 05:27:08 pm
I paticularly like the layout of your website as it is very professional. Also, the theme is very clear and unique which arouses much of my interest!
I look forward to seeing much more information because it is not so detailed enough at this stage.
Peggy
4/7/2011 05:30:49 pm
The pages are short and concise=]
But it would be better to have the back button so readers can refer back. Now it would be a little confusing where myself is up to.